cute! i like the flow of the material on her dress.

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i like her dress a lot! the detail of the flowers on the hem is adorable. cute shoes too :3. her face has such a great balance of detail and cartoon-y style. her stance though, makes it look like she's about to collapse. if you bring her back foward a bit, and maybe turned her hips towards us, you could still have that "i'm a sassy flapper leaning backwards a little bit" look, but it would be more realistic. as for the "old photo look," maybe if you drew a background, but made it black and white or sepia-toned, with just her colored, you could pull off the "old photo look" but make it a bit more creative. as it is, it just looks dark.

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i think its quite good. i actually think that your idea about the old photo look was good, even if it didn't turn out like you planned. live and learn.

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thanks!

Very well done!

Thanks!